Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 18, 19102 at 16:54:46:
In Reply to: Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources,such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your oppinion. posted by Anjali on January 18, 19102 at 13:24:39:
You made your point very well. Many good details.
A few comments:
out of all, = of all
the most important and valuable natural resource today is trees-forests. (You only need trees here.)
With trees destruction, we will loose the invaluable medicines that we get from it.
"With the destruction OF TREES, we will LOSE the invaluable mediciines that we get from THEM."
Herbal medicines are free from side effect and it gives long lasting relief.
"and THEY give long lasting...."
: Today, in the name OF modernization,
If trees will be cut down,
"If trees are cut down..."