Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 18, 19102 at 17:03:36:
In Reply to: Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a larger number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choise. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer. posted by cristina andreea on January 08, 19102 at 05:43:10:
I'm not sure what you really believe; your arguments went both ways in your essay.
This would be OK if you tell us you are conflicted in your opinion and then tell us why.
Some comments:
In the same time, I find it difficult to let others have me engaged in a lot of relationships.
"At the same time, I find it difficult to be engaged in a lot of relationships." or " I find it difficult to have others try to engage me in a relationship."
but afford yourself to change friends more often
"but give yourself the opportunity to change friends more often."
It is better not to begin sentences with "But" and "and".