Posted by Michele Peters on April 26, 19102 at 13:24:50:
In Reply to: Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students.Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students.Discuss these views.Which view do you agree with ?Explain why. posted by Jason Zhang on April 22, 19102 at 21:53:28:
Essays should have three general ideas. Add a third reason and give supporting details.
There are some grammar issues and misspellings. Re-read your essay and see if you can catch them. Be sure to proofread your essay carefully.
Some comments:
"Nowadays,it has been argued intensely for many years..."
"People have argued for many years..."
"...university¡¯s target is to product more people who have plentiful knowledge"
"...university's target is to produce more knowledgeable people"
You should avoid starting a sentence with "So".
Good start!