Posted by Jason Zhang on April 28, 19102 at 03:33:12:
In Reply to: Give three reasons posted by Michele Peters on April 26, 19102 at 13:24:50:
: Essays should have three general ideas. Add a third reason and give supporting details.
: There are some grammar issues and misspellings. Re-read your essay and see if you can catch them. Be sure to proofread your essay carefully.
: Some comments:
: "Nowadays,it has been argued intensely for many years..."
: "People have argued for many years..."
: "...university¡¯s target is to product more people who have plentiful knowledge"
: "...university's target is to produce more knowledgeable people"
: You should avoid starting a sentence with "So".
: Good start!