Posted by Michele Peters on April 28, 19102 at 19:03:57:
In Reply to: some people prefer to eat food at home,others prefer o eat food at a restaurant,which do you prefer ? posted by jenny on March 28, 19102 at 21:39:00:
Good job. Some suggestions:
Be sure to proofread.
You have a lot of ideas here. Choose and focus on three of your reasons. Your essay should have three paragraphs with three reasons with supporting details and examples. Your conclusion should restate why eating at home is better.