Posted by megan on March 04, 19103 at 12:09:24:
In Reply to: I'm eating in posted by Michele Peters on April 28, 19102 at 19:03:57:
: Good job. Some suggestions:
: Be sure to proofread.
: You have a lot of ideas here. Choose and focus on three of your reasons. Your essay should have three paragraphs with three reasons with supporting details and examples. Your conclusion should restate why eating at home is better.