Posted by Lin Lougheed on May 06, 19102 at 06:02:55:
In Reply to: borrowing money from your friend will harm your friendship.do you agree or disagree with it? posted by david on May 06, 19102 at 03:42:02:
Your command of vocabulary and grammar indicates that your essay should be better. Read your essay again. Pay attention to standard essay practices: capitalizating "I" and the start of a sentence and indenting each paragraph. If you make your sentences less long, you won't forget to include certain verbs and prepositions.
I think you forgot some words as you typed from a written essay.
"on contrary" =On the other hand,...
Good luck. Your essay is good;you just have to pay attention.