Posted by Lin Lougheed on May 06, 19102 at 18:53:17:
In Reply to: agree or disagree:Should business hire employees for their entire lives posted by popcorn on May 06, 19102 at 10:04:13:
You stated three reasons and gave supporting details for each.
You might think of a way to summarize the three points to include in your opening paragraph.
You should pay attention to punctuation and indentation. This makes it easier for a grader to read your essay.
"satisfied job" = satisfactory job