Posted by Michele Peters on May 12, 19102 at 09:35:35:
In Reply to: Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. posted by popcorn on May 07, 19102 at 00:16:00:
Your essay is well thought out. There are a few grammar issues. Try reading through the essay again to see if you can find them.
Some comments:
The second sentence is long and confusing. Make the sentences shorter.
been so much debated like in our society,for our country ,China,has a
been so much debased as in our society.
As far as I am concerned,I would vote for the former choice without
Use "preserving old, historical buildings" in place of "the former choice". That will make your position clearer.
Restate yout reasons in the conclusion: buildings have tremendous academic,economic and social value.
How can we destroy them!
? not !