Posted by Michele Peters on June 16, 19102 at 12:00:20:
In Reply to: Topic-53 posted by sue on June 05, 19102 at 14:32:56:
You make good points and give good examples. Be sure to give three general statements with supporting details. In your conclusion restate your three reasons.
Some other suggestions:
Some people agree it, while others
Some people agree while others...
hate the mathematic,
mathematics
how can you do computer science job.
...a computer science job?
if you love child,
love children,
love to be a teacher,
love being a teacher or love teaching
you will do not care about how much you can earn and be a wonderful teacher.
you will not care about how much you earn and will be a wonderful teacher.
: In the second place, some people go to work just for getting some important
...just to get important...
: Admittedly, some of us go to work for the payment. They need the money to pay
some of US... WE need...
: From what have been discussed
...has been...