Posted by Dawuoo on August 02, 19102 at 02:51:46:
In Reply to: do things you don't enjoy. posted by sabrina on August 01, 19102 at 03:50:14:
I will also take toefl two weeks later, my opinion for your essay mainly from grammar mistakes and it is just for discussion:
: When I am asking myself this question years ago, I was just leaving home and going to university. Then I met (is it better using "encounter"?) the problem:
These things often happen in our lives, now I don¡¯t hesitate choosing the latter. (hestitate to choose?)
If I did things I liked regardless (of?)their emotions, their unhappiness will exceed my own happiness, and I would regret that I had turned them down.
I can adjust my emotion and guide my classmates, or chatting with my family without letting them know of (what's the use of "of") my bad mood. Maybe at first I need (to?)make up, but after a while, I will persuade myself and I am as happy as I look like.