Posted by Naluwan on August 05, 19102 at 08:55:16:
In Reply to: important traditions and beliefs we should maintain posted by sabrina on August 03, 19102 at 05:42:22:
You have very good viewpoints! Because you give me lots of examples. But I would like to give you some suggestions about your essay.(1)Mayby you can abbreviate your essay.(2)In your first paragraph, you should use the word "meanwhile" instead of using the word "meantime". Because "meanwhile" is more formal than "meantime". Thanks!