Posted by Michele Peters on August 11, 19102 at 11:39:10:
In Reply to: "A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer." posted by Violet on August 11, 19102 at 10:55:01:
Your essay is well organized. You give good examples and should try to find one more.
Some other comments:
which academic SUBJECTS to offer.
Tibetan students have the courses to study while others needn't.
while others do not.
is that the same knowledge if be
taught in different forms according to actuality may have a better effect.
...the same knowledge taught in a way that is taylored to the students' cultures will have a better impact.
Remember to proofread your essay.