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Posted by jason on September 23, 19102 at 10:36:33:

In Reply to: Upbeat posted by Michele Peters on September 22, 19102 at 13:38:33:

: Your essay is upbeat and makes good points.

: Some comments:

: Restate your reasons in the last concluding paragraph.

: It is a human nature that people always
: It is human nature....

: There are numerous reasons that why I hold this opinion so confidently. I
: There are numberous reasons why I hold ...

: Curiosity is another human nature.
: Being curious is also a part of human nature.

: In other words, they do not satisfied what they already know.
: ...they are not satisfied with...




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