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Posted by Michele Peters on September 22, 19102 at 13:38:33:

In Reply to: People are never satisfied with what they have. posted by Jason on September 18, 19102 at 23:17:00:

Your essay is upbeat and makes good points.

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Restate your reasons in the last concluding paragraph.

It is a human nature that people always
It is human nature....

There are numerous reasons that why I hold this opinion so confidently. I
There are numberous reasons why I hold ...

Curiosity is another human nature.
Being curious is also a part of human nature.

In other words, they do not satisfied what they already know.
...they are not satisfied with...



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