Posted by Michele Peters on September 29, 19102 at 11:14:19:
In Reply to: Some people believe that advertising on television is generally beneficial to viewers. Others take the position that television advertising has primarily negative effects. Which position do you agree with? Explain your decision, using specific examples. posted by Madhavi on September 24, 19102 at 11:04:44:
Your essay is well structured and shows a good command of the English language.
Some comments:
It gives us a good exposure of the all
Advertising gives...exposure to...
People planning to buy a house can be benefited by the advertisements on the
...can benefit from...
Avoid using too many "it" and "this"; instead say what "it" or "this" is; for example, Advertising, Information, etc.