Posted by Madhavi on September 29, 19102 at 22:27:28:
In Reply to: Good job. posted by Michele Peters on September 29, 19102 at 11:14:19:
: Your essay is well structured and shows a good command of the English language.
: Some comments:
: It gives us a good exposure of the all
: Advertising gives...exposure to...
: People planning to buy a house can be benefited by the advertisements on the
: ...can benefit from...
: Avoid using too many "it" and "this"; instead say what "it" or "this" is; for example, Advertising, Information, etc.