Posted by sheena on January 22, 19103 at 01:51:31:
In Reply to: When choosing a place to live, what do you consider most important: location, size, style, number of rooms, types of rooms, or other features? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. posted by asha on January 02, 19103 at 20:03:36:
: When choosen a place to live: I consider....
When choosing a place to live I would consider..........etc
all the features like location, size,style, number of rooms , types of rooms and some other features.
Don't repeat the word features here,TWICE in the same sentence.....instead try 'etc' or just ...'and some others.'
Only thing is choice of some of the features will be given less importance.
Why not rephrase it to........"Some of these criteria are more important to me than the others"
: Location: This is the most important and main feature i will look for....
...........better use "... is the most important (main--means the same thing!) feature/criteria that I will be looking for"
Living is something which refelects our mind and that inturn reflects our thinking, and the way we move around in a society. It is a chain process.
try
"The way we live reflects on our mind-set,that is the way we think, and the way we want to fit in into our society. They are all inter-related"
In my choice......
or My choice of a location for living would be in a...."
or better "In my opinion, the location of my house should be in a......
Ok, I think that's enough for today
Cheers!