Posted by sheena on January 22, 19103 at 01:56:54:
In Reply to: Some suggestions... posted by sheena on January 22, 19103 at 01:51:31:
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** : When choosen a place to live: I consider....
: When choosing a place to live I would consider..........etc
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***: all the features like location, size,style, number of rooms , types of rooms and some other features.
: Don't repeat the word features here,TWICE in the same sentence.....instead try 'etc' or just ...'and some others.'
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***: Only thing is choice of some of the features will be given less importance.
: Why not rephrase it to........"Some of these criteria are more important to me than the others"
***: : Location: This is the most important and main feature i will look for....
: ...........better use "... is the most important (main--means the same thing!) feature/criteria that I will be looking for"
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****: Living is something which refelects our mind and that inturn reflects our thinking, and the way we move around in a society. It is a chain process.
: try
: "The way we live reflects on our mind-set,that is the way we think, and the way we want to fit in into our society. They are all inter-related"
***: In my choice......
: or My choice of a location for living would be in a...."
: or better "In my opinion, the location of my house should be in a......
: Ok, I think that's enough for today
: Cheers!