Posted by Lin Lougheed on August 24, 19101 at 21:31:37:
In Reply to: Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? posted by Penka Kovatcheva on August 18, 19101 at 03:25:04:
You have written a very cogent essay. You can easily correct the few grammar errors yourself if you reviewed your essay.
It would be a great help to the rest of our on-line writers if you would help them with their essays.
Let me point out a few items in your essay.
1. In your opening paragraph, you write: "I believe that university students should not be forced to attend classes." But in fact, you do believe that Freshmen should attend classes. If you make your opening statement more specific, I I believe that most university students should not..."your second paragraph will define "most".
2. The last sentence of the first paragraph could be divided. It is not wrong, but it would be stronger as two sentences.
"and there could be no more classes but virtual lectures on the computer." change to "These traditional universities could be replaced by virtual..."
3. In the fourth paragraph, first sentence,you need an infinitive or your need to switch the word order.
" it may soon become obsolete [to go] to classes to listen...
or
"Going to classes to listen to lectures may soon become obsolete."
3. In the fourth paragraph, second sentence,you need to switch the subject/verb order.
"Even now on-line universities which [...] exist."