Posted by Lin Lougheed on August 24, 19101 at 21:49:14:
In Reply to: do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Watching television is bad for children . Use specific details and examples to support your answer posted by alexander on August 15, 19101 at 14:53:50:
I enjoyed reading your essay. You have an interesting styleand a large vocabulary. Be careful with that dictionary though.
"corporal chastisement" should be "corporal punishment"
You made a few errors with subject/verb agreement.
I would recommend that you continue to read English essays/articles/books. When you find a style that you admire, transcribe word for word exactly the way the author wrote. Claim his/her style for your own. This will help you gain control of English idioms.